writing a song without a chorus?? 🤔🤔

in pop music, the chorus is oftentimes the biggest part of the song. that's the part that goes viral. that's the part that has the most hooks, it's the catchiest.

but did you know that big choruses are a more recent trend in popular music? songs used to be more about the verses and the story and refrains were more commonly used to tie things together.

even looking back, we can see that artists like The Beatles and Bob Dylan used refrains a loooot in their writing.

the song that we are releasing today really tells a story about the state of our world today and we felt like a simple repeating line (a refrain) instead of chorus made more sense.

it comes out later today and it's called Red Line! let us know what you think and try writing a song with a refrain today, instead of a chorus!

happy writing, creatives!!! 🩷🩵🧡

#songwritingtips #songwriting #songwritinginspiration #songwritingchallenge #songwritingstruggles

2025/8/1 Edited to

... Read moreWhile modern pop music often centers around catchy choruses designed to go viral, the tradition of songwriting originally placed greater emphasis on verses and refrains. A refrain is a repeated phrase or line within a song that ties the narrative together, offering cohesion without the need for a full chorus. This technique was widely used by iconic songwriters like Bob Dylan and The Beatles, who crafted songs that focused more on storytelling and lyrical content. Choosing to write a song without a chorus can be a powerful creative challenge, pushing artists to focus on narrative flow and emotional resonance. For instance, a refrain can reinforce key themes of the song while maintaining simplicity and intimacy. This approach suits songs with deeper messages or storytelling intentions, allowing the listener to engage with the lyrics on a more thoughtful level. The song "Red Line," mentioned in the original article, exemplifies this style by telling a story relevant to today’s world using a simple repeating refrain. This method enhances the listener’s connection to the message without relying on the typical hook-heavy chorus. For emerging songwriters, experimenting with refrains instead of choruses can open new possibilities in song structure and creativity. To get started, try writing a song focused on verses that develop a story or theme, then select a meaningful line to repeat as a refrain. Think about how this repeated line can underscore your song's message or mood. Consider studying songs by Bob Dylan or The Beatles to understand different ways refrains are incorporated effectively. By moving away from the chorus-centered formula, you expand your songwriting toolkit. This can result in songs that stand out for their lyrical depth and unique structure, engaging audiences who crave authentic and thoughtful music experiences.

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