a lonely poem for a somber workday

a poem I wrote in my way to work while self reflecting and contemplating what I’m doing with my life. this is twenty-five, I think (for me, at least).

I am constantly contemplating and self reflecting and I think I’m finally starting to be ready for change again.

follow me here or on insta for more poetry 🫶🏼 I know my aesthetic is a bit different than the typical stuff on lemon8 but maybe that’s a great thing 🤍

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2024/12/11 Edited to

... Read moreAfter sharing my poem, 'a lonely poem for a somber workday,' I've been reflecting even more on those quiet moments of contemplation. You know those times, perhaps on a dimly lit subway car, when the world outside fades and your own thoughts become the loudest sound? That's often where my deepest reflections on life and loneliness begin. It’s fascinating how a simple commute can spark such profound feelings, turning an ordinary journey into a canvas for introspection. The original poem came from a place of intense self-reflection, especially as I navigate what it means to be in my mid-twenties. It’s a period many of us experience – a sense of longing, a quiet ache, questioning our paths and purpose. Sometimes it feels like an 'unfixable brokenness,' as the OCR mentioned, but perhaps it's just part of the journey towards understanding ourselves better. This journey of self-discovery, which Google users often search for with queries like 'the search for self awareness is often a difficult one,' is a core theme in my work. It’s about acknowledging the internal struggles and finding strength in vulnerability. For me, writing poetry is a powerful way to process these emotions. When I speak of a 'somber workday,' it’s not necessarily about the job itself, but the internal landscape we carry with us. This is where the 'dark academia' aesthetic often comes into play in my work. It’s not just about old books and moody lighting; it’s about delving into deeper thoughts, embracing introspection, and finding beauty in the melancholic and the profound. It’s about recognizing that 'poignant reflection' is a valid and vital part of growth. I often find myself drawn to themes of 'grief poems' or 'poems about longing' because they capture universal human experiences that are often overlooked in daily life. If you're someone who often finds yourself searching for self-awareness, or grappling with feelings of loneliness and wanting change, you're definitely not alone. Many of the queries I see around 'poems about loneliness' or 'short poems about being alone' tell me there's a collective experience of these feelings. It’s not always despair; sometimes it’s a quiet space for growth, a chance to acknowledge those 'emphasizing echoes and loss' that shape us. Even a simple 'aesthetic train quote' can capture a fleeting mood during a journey, much like the subway setting depicted in the OCR of my poem's image, inspiring us to find beauty in our surroundings. I find solace in expressing these feelings, turning them into words that might resonate with others. There's a particular beauty in acknowledging the 'grief' of what was, or the 'longing' for what might be. It’s about creating a space for those 'moody musings' and finding that even in moments of solitude, we can connect through shared human experiences. So, if you’re looking for a ‘poignant poem’ or some reflective prose to accompany your own moments of quiet contemplation, I hope my words offer a small comfort or a sense of shared understanding. It's about finding the echoes of our own experiences in art, and realizing that even in loneliness, there's a profound connection to be made, encouraging us all to keep searching for our truest selves.

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