Del Obispo Road: A New Horror Short Story by MCoulombeWrites

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Here is a snippet from the first draft of my new short story DEL OBISPO ROAD, available now on my Substack page.

https://mcoulombewrites.substack.com/p/del-obispo-road

#horror #shortstory #writing #writer #ghosts

7/13 Edited to

If you're a fan of horror fiction that seamlessly blends supernatural elements with suspenseful storytelling, Del Obispo Road offers a captivating experience. What I find particularly engaging about stories like this is how they create tension through atmosphere and character reactions—like Rachel standing awkwardly in the living room, uncertain and trying not to listen, which immediately sets an unsettling mood. Stories centered around haunted locations or ghostly presences tap into a primal fear, and Del Obispo Road appears to do just that by setting the scene in a place loaded with mystery. I always appreciate when authors use vivid descriptions and carefully paced narratives to build creepiness without resorting to overused jump scares. For writers interested in the craft, this story is a good example of how to weave horror and the supernatural into a short story format effectively. It balances character development with plot momentum and evokes strong visuals in the reader’s mind. Plus, publishing such work on platforms like Substack allows authors to connect directly with their readership and receive valuable feedback. If you enjoy exploring new horror tales or are looking to improve your own writing, reading Del Obispo Road could inspire your creativity. It’s also a reminder of how ghost stories can still feel fresh and terrifying when told with skill and heart.

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