my fails as a writer

I pulled these from the first draft of my manuscript. I put them on a second document because the surrounding parts gave too much away.

For starters, when you back into a wall and someone is coming at you, it’s implied that you are cornered with no where to move.

Second, the red word was an edit I made as I was creating this document. There was no word there before just “She five feet away.”

Lastly, the situation is explained previously and with the intensity of the book, it is also clear that they aren’t doing some easy work. Without being said, I have a lot of these.

My goal is to open up about every little thing that I have experienced so far as I go through the writing process of my debut novel. To show that the art isn’t perfect the first time around. I am constantly changing things and rewriting as I go through the second draft and it has made a significant change to the storyline. It’s okay to make mistakes and laugh about them. These aren’t even the worse ones, but my editing has some funny commentary to the sides I can’t help to laugh at.

#writingproblems #writingmystory #writing #writingjourney #writingrevolution #writinganovel #authorjourney #booktok #bookstagram

2024/8/23 Edited to

... Read moreWriting is often portrayed as a glamorous art, but the reality is filled with struggle and self-doubt. Many aspiring authors face challenges, from writer's block to the fear of judgment over their drafts. One of the most liberating aspects of the writing journey is realizing that flaws do not define your narrative quality; instead, they pave the way for growth. Embracing mistakes not only unleashes creativity but also allows a deeper connection with readers who appreciate authenticity. Developing a writing routine can further ease the pressure of achieving perfection. Setting aside dedicated time to write can foster a space where creativity flows more freely. Engaging in writing groups or forums, like those found on platforms like Lemon8, enables writers to share experiences and find camaraderie among their peers. The community offers a wealth of feedback, encouragement, and shared learning. Moreover, exploring aspects like editing techniques is crucial. Understanding how to refine your draft without losing your original voice can lead to significant improvements in your storytelling. Online resources, such as webinars or writing workshops, can provide invaluable insights into the editing process, helping writers transition from first drafts to polished pieces. Lastly, it's important to celebrate small victories and find humor in the process. Writing can be an isolating experience, but laughter and levity can not only enhance your enjoyment but also build resilience against future challenges. Above all, remember that every established author has faced their own share of failures and rejections. Each step taken in the writing journey, no matter how imperfect, is a step towards mastering the craft.

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