poems by oob (me)

hello!! i’m ash but oob is kind of a name that i stick with on social media. i am a writer and am working on my first poetry book currently which is probably the wildest and best experiences ever. getting to not only learn so much about myself but also being able to process and heal from my issues through my words.

something that was very important to me from the start was the music. i didn’t do it on purpose, it just happened one day as i was listening to some classical music while writing. i was listening to “lady of glass” by erik sigurd and it just screamed at me. “this is exhibit” one of my first poems i wrote was suddenly all i could hear in this song. then, it just sort of went from there. it kept happening on accident until eventually i realized how much it meant to me; having music that tied into them. music became another required piece to complete the poems.

i’ve done all the drawings and every song choice is very deliberate. these mean the world to me and i want to share them with as many people as i can. i want nothing more than to be a writer and connect with people from everywhere. i want people to understand me and for people to feel understood.

i’ve posted quite a few on my insta already which is why i feel comfortable sharing this one. i’ve never done ANY of this before. (try to gain an audience or get published) i don’t know what the rules are and are there rules? there have to be. like should i hold back from posting too many of my poems if i plan on releasing a book? or, and i swear im being so genuine when i say this, how do other book people do book? ya know!? there’s so many things i don’t know and i have no clue what to expect or where to start. i’m just trying to focus on finishing the draft. (editing, illustrating, organizing, etc.)

anyway, enough rambling, all of my writing is pretty vulnerable for me and this one i really liked writing because of the topic and the structure is different than i usual do. i’m still new at writing poetry and finding my feet in here, so i’m still figuring out my style or good structure. i struggle with always thinking my work needs to look exactly like everyone else who does that thing to be “correct” rather than just letting it be my own thing. it’s always fun when i challenge myself and can go in my own direction successfully. i like letting it get a little more abstract.

enjoy my words and don’t forget to listen to the song if you can, that part is very important to me and means a lot for the poem itself. like i said, the idea became that the song was helped complete the poem.

thanks for listening to me rant. love ya!! let me know what you think!! see ya!!

bing bong~oobskadoob

poem// “rated r… we okay”

song// https://youtu.be/7K4sEj_Lsvo?si=dEn59-cmr7RAnYTt

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2024/1/1 Edited to

... Read moreBuilding on what I shared in my main post, I wanted to dive a bit deeper into the magic that happens when music and poetry collide, and how that's truly shaping my first book. It's not just about finding a good beat; it’s about discovering the emotional core that a song can unlock within your own words. For me, it often starts with a specific track, like how Erik Sigurd’s "Lady of Glass" just spoke to my poem, "exhibit." It's like the song provides a soundtrack to emotions I'm trying to articulate. More recently, I've found myself exploring this connection with artists like Ethel Cain. Her track "Televangelism" became a fascinating "POEM SONG ASSOCIATION" moment for me. Sometimes, a song doesn't just inspire a feeling; it provides a whole narrative world or a specific mood that guides my pen. If you're a writer, try putting on a playlist and just letting the music guide your thoughts without any pressure. You might be surprised by what emerges! Speaking of emergence, many of you might relate to the "pain is essential" idea when it comes to creative expression. It’s definitely been a core part of my journey. Writing isn't always comfortable; it often means confronting difficult feelings or experiences. But I've found that this vulnerability, this willingness to sit with those raw emotions, is where the most authentic and deeply meaningful poems are born. It's how we process, heal, and ultimately connect with others who might be feeling something similar. My poem "rated r… we okay" is a testament to this—it delves into personal struggles with body image and intimacy, exploring themes of self-reflection. It wasn't easy to write, but it felt incredibly important to put those feelings on the page. For anyone out there wondering 'how to know if your poem is good,' I get it! It's a question I grapple with constantly. My biggest takeaway so far is this: don't chase perfection or try to make your work look exactly like someone else's. Your unique voice is your greatest asset. A 'good' poem doesn't always follow strict rules; it's one that resonates, either with you or with a reader. It’s about honesty and allowing your true self to shine through. Experiment with structure, imagery, and sound. And remember, the act of writing itself is a victory. Don't be afraid to let it be abstract, to challenge yourself, and to go in your own direction. Another tip for aspiring poets: read widely! See how different poets handle themes like love, bitterness, or transformation. While I certainly don't write "deep meaningful love poems for him" or "feel good poems" exclusively, understanding the spectrum of poetic expression helps me define my own space. Don't be afraid to tackle challenging topics like those explored in "rated r… we okay." The world needs more honest voices. Ultimately, my goal is to connect, to make people feel understood. So, thank you for reading my words and for being part of this creative exploration. What music inspires your writing? Or what themes do you find yourself drawn to as a reader or writer? Let me know!

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kaylie

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Captain Lemon8

This is so cool! Welcome to the community✨ 💫