POV- the congregation watched you repent.

Repentance in horror stories often amplifies tension by blending spiritual and psychological torment, and this piece vividly captures that atmosphere. The mention of Latin phrases such as “Regina cineris” (queen of Ash) and “Regina damnatorum” (queen of the damned) adds layers of mystique and dread, drawing readers deeper into the dark ritualistic experience. From my own experiences exploring horror literature, using first-person POV is powerful in immersing readers—it places them directly in the protagonist’s shoes, heightening emotional impact. The tactile detail of Sister Veronica’s painful grip adds realism, making the unseen horrors feel tangible. Moreover, the backdrop of a religious setting, coupled with eerie figures like nuns and priests, taps into common fears of authority and punishment in sacred spaces. This setting leverages the contrast between sanctity and horror for greater effect. If you appreciate horror that delves into spiritual anguish and psychological horror, this excerpt sets a promising tone for the upcoming release Hollow Wing. Anticipation for the full story is heightened by the vivid imagery and suspenseful narration, inviting readers to explore themes of guilt, fear, and the supernatural in a tightly woven narrative.