I’m writing a book…

I'm writing what's called a Romantasy novel. It's a modern retelling of the Hades and Persephone myth. When my first draft is done, would anyone mind being my guinea pig reader? Give me some notes for when I go into revising and editing?

2025/6/30 Edited to

... Read moreRomantasy is a fascinating genre that combines elements of romantic fiction with fantasy themes, drawing readers into enchanting worlds filled with complex characters and vivid settings. The myth of Hades and Persephone has captured the imagination of countless writers and readers, serving as an archetype for love, loss, and the transformation of character. In this modern retelling, the dynamics of the relationship between Hades, the God of the Underworld, and Persephone, the Goddess of Spring, can be explored through fresh perspectives – transforming traditional themes into contemporary narratives. As you craft your Romantasy novel, consider how you might incorporate rich detail and character development to resonate with readers. Themes of personal growth, the balance between light and dark, and the power of love can offer depth and promote engagement with your audience. Don't forget to ask your readers not just for feedback on plot and pacing, but also character arcs and emotional resonance. Peer insights can be crucial for identifying the strengths and weaknesses that you may overlook in your writing. Embrace the revisions, as this is where the heart of storytelling lives.

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