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Xander reached into his inside jacket pocket and pulled out a card before handing it to me.

I took the small rectangle of thick cream colored card stock and rubbed my fingers over the dimpled edges. Odd, from what I recalled people didn't normally hand over damaged cards.

I frowned down at it. No, not damaged, this was a deliberate design, a scalloped edge not dimpled. Thick stock, embossed lettering in antique gold, with an elegant calligraphy script underneath. I didn't recognize the name, though the initials and details made it clear this was a law firm. Named partner.

"I assume this Mr. Roberts is the lawyer representing whoever's interested?" Why my company. What was the angle here?

"No, that's the buyer."

I arched an eyebrow. I kept hold of the card and brushed my thumb over the embossed name. "Interesting. Not a name I know."

"New York."

New York, east coast capitol for humans and paranormals alike, and my original home, though I'd avoided the place like the plague. I doubted there was anyone there who'd recognize me now, and given that I'd only moved to Minneapolis, this time at least, eight years ago, the odds of anyone connecting Travis MacIntire with Thomas Briant were slim. I hadn't used that name in well over two hundred years, and taken pains to avoid returning to New York whenever possible.

"What would bring a New York lawyer out here, to buy a firm—"

"Only your share of the company, and no, I've no idea what his interest is. Only that he offered me an ungodly sum. One I was almost tempted to take." He shrugged when I caught his eye. "It's nothing personal, all business. Then I remembered the reason why our business is doing so well is you, well, and my own not so insignificant contributions." The business was, at best, diverse. To others it might appear as a jumbled mess with no real focus.

Our bank accounts and connections said different.

We'd grown nicely in the last three years especially, and I'd been on the look out for people trying to buy us out, but that was one of the reasons I'd avoided becoming publicly traded. Unless either myself or Xander were willing to sell our part, it would be impossible for someone else to come in and take over. Well, not impossible, but damned difficult and would likely involve one or both of us dying.

Xander had wanted to go publish, but a few quiet explanations about what would come to light in the way of both of our dealings, had put Xander off the momentary fancy of applying to the various government departments involved in taking a company public.

#darkromance #wipwriting #writersoflemon #writersoflemon8 #authorsoflemon8

2025/12/22 Edited to

... Read moreThis excerpt deftly blends elements of dark romance and mystery, with a corporate intrigue twist that enriches the narrative tension. The presence of a New York lawyer interested in purchasing only a specific share of the company adds suspense and raises questions about the underlying motives. The story hints at deeper supernatural lore by referencing the narrator’s avoidance of New York and the use of an alias for over two centuries, implying a rich backstory involving immortality or paranormal lineage. This creates a compelling mixture of business drama and paranormal intrigue that can captivate readers who enjoy complex character histories intertwined with thrilling plots. Readers seeking stories that combine financial power struggles with supernatural themes will find this snippet particularly engaging. The references to careful maneuvering around public stock offerings and the risks of unwanted takeovers add realism and stakes to the business aspect, while the implied paranormal elements promise an expansive and immersive world. The use of detailed descriptions, such as the unique design of the business card with scalloped edges and embossed lettering in antique gold, adds texture and sensory richness to the scene, inviting readers to immerse themselves fully. Tagging within the community (#darkromance, #wipwriting) further encourages engagement among writers and readers who crave serialized storytelling and character-driven plots infused with passion and mystery. Overall, this resonates well with audiences that appreciate stories where personal and professional lives collide under extraordinary circumstances, setting up potential developments that can explore themes of identity, loyalty, and power in both the human and paranormal realms.

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